◎ 영작에 큰 어려움을 느끼시는 분은 친절한 한국어 설명이 곁든 한국인 선생님 교정을
받으시길 바랍니다. (영어일기만 해당)

< 원문 >
Date : Sun May 30 / Weather : sunny
I writing yesterday diary Because I was tired
I watching movie(materics?) in theater.
The sentence is about machin’s world.
It was not much interested.
But my eyes enjoyed so that screen effect was good.
It was good because of enjoy culture activities after a long time.

< 원어민 교사 교정후 >
Date : Sunday May 30th 2006 / Weather : sunny
I did not writeing in my diary yesterday diary Bbecause I was tired (.)
I watchingsaw the movie(materics?) Matrix in the theater.
The sentencemovie iswas about a world of machinesmachin’s world.
It was not muchvery interested. (The movie was not very interesting.)
But my eyes enjoyed so that screenthe visual effects waswere good.
It was good because ofI enjoyed this culture activitiescultural activity after a long time.